Wednesday, October 20, 2010
Core II Reflection
I actually liked this essay a lot even though I had some problems with it. I kind of got stuck with a few things like about what to write about and to stay on topic. It seemed so easy to get off topic and write about something that has nothing to do with the topic or what I was trying to prove, but I thought I did a good job. But, I liked having to analyze something and be able to say my opinion on it, without being wrong or write. Again, I felt like I could put myself in the essay very easily and tell my reader's how I felt about the magazine through my eyes. So, it was successful.
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Your essay is really good so far, my recommendations would be to:
ReplyDelete-add more about the Ryan Renolds article
-also add more about the next artcle that you talk about (Hottest Women in Rock History), why did it catch your attention? why do you think they put that article in the magazine?
-fix minor gramatical errors
good job on:
-the descriptions
-word choice
-sentence structure
-your intake and opinions throughout